This is for the first time, i have read something which has touched core of my heart . Even when i was in the middle of the context, i could not stop my tears to flow down as every word, I was reading was thrashing the sentiments and waives of past memories flowed . Sitting in a couch in office cabbin as of now, I cant scream but believe me, My inner soul is striving hard to get into the same ambience which existed before in the presence of dad.
Actually, I am ur senior bro but , You have left me far behind in terms of attaining maturity and i simply appreciate you for rising high and revealing your sentiments with the creativity of urs i.e. Writing and letting each word speak itself .
Its not just a para or testimonial or portrait of ur memories but it has lot more behind it, i can feel the pain, one has gone into while summing up the things and publishing this final write up .
A big round of applause from your one and only bro. You are simply the bestest sister in the world.
I wish and pray to god that in next life as well, I always get u as my sister.
I too really miss you dad.....please come back and bring bak those happy moments once again. Without you being here, I feel as lost in wilderness.
..here u described papa's life in a perfect way,,i am short of words to praise ur efforts.. i can feel ur emotions in ur every single words as how tough it was for all of us to settle without presence of papa..i am speechless all the way..but yes i must say one thing ..."every girl may not be the queen to her husband but every daughter always gonna be the princess to her father...so u always be the princess of mine...my sweet doll (gudiya) ur"s one and only one Bhabhi cum friend cum sister.love you lots miss u papa.
appny papa ki yaad bhi taaza ho aai , Papa to Papa ........chay aap ky ya mere . Jeevan mi ma- bap ko khabhi hi bhulaya nahi ja sakta . Regards :Ashutosh
Great pains were taken really appreciatable dear even after so busy sechdule ur efforts to create such a nice, wonderful & touching poem in the love of uncle ji is jst gullible n adorable i jst chkd it n broke down into tears so pure dear evn aftr reading it i was speechless wht to commnt...........u r luckly enough evn more luckiest was urs father to hv such a lovely loving caring daughter dear may god alwz bless u!
Very touching..... It shows what a man your father was & how much he means to you.
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This is for the first time, i have read something which has touched core of my heart . Even when i was in the middle of the context, i could not stop my tears to flow down as every word, I was reading was thrashing the sentiments and waives of past memories flowed . Sitting in a couch in office cabbin as of now, I cant scream but believe me, My inner soul is striving hard to get into the same ambience which existed before in the presence of dad.
ReplyDeleteActually, I am ur senior bro but , You have left me far behind in terms of attaining maturity and i simply appreciate you for rising high and revealing your sentiments with the creativity of urs i.e. Writing and letting each word speak itself .
Its not just a para or testimonial or portrait of ur memories but it has lot more behind it, i can feel the pain, one has gone into while summing up the things and publishing this final write up .
A big round of applause from your one and only bro. You are simply the bestest sister in the world.
I wish and pray to god that in next life as well, I always get u as my sister.
I too really miss you dad.....please come back and bring bak those happy moments once again. Without you being here, I feel as lost in wilderness.
Thanks for such words bhai , Love u lots n stay blessed :)
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ReplyDeleteTruely Said, a daughter is always a dad's princess.
Delete..here u described papa's life in a perfect way,,i am short of words to praise ur efforts.. i can feel ur emotions in ur every single words as how tough it was for all of us to settle without presence of papa..i am speechless all the way..but yes i must say one thing ..."every girl may not be the queen to her husband but every daughter always gonna be the princess to her father...so u always be the princess of mine...my sweet doll (gudiya)
ReplyDeleteur"s one and only one Bhabhi cum friend cum sister.love you lots
miss u papa.
Finally I can see ur comments in my blog ginu..:)
DeleteThanks for feeling the essence of my poem and giving ur valuable comments.
Love u sis..
appny papa ki yaad bhi taaza ho aai , Papa to Papa ........chay aap ky ya mere . Jeevan mi ma- bap ko khabhi hi bhulaya nahi ja sakta .
ReplyDeleteRegards :Ashutosh
Awsome poetry...After so busy in office work you have the time for your thoughts,feelings ...salute to a brave daughter -Naresh Khurana
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ReplyDeleteSimply put, too good and touching for any comments. God bless you and your father.
Great pains were taken really appreciatable dear even after so busy sechdule ur efforts to create such a nice, wonderful & touching poem in the love of uncle ji is jst gullible n adorable i jst chkd it n broke down into tears so pure dear evn aftr reading it i was speechless wht to commnt...........u r luckly enough evn more luckiest was urs father to hv such a lovely loving caring daughter dear may god alwz bless u!
ReplyDeleteWorth reading.. I feel it's more than poem.. love .. respect.. emotions everything in it.
ReplyDeleteGod bless you and your father.
Sukoon Milta Hai,
ReplyDeleteDo Lafz Kaagaz Par Utaar Kar,......
Cheekh Bhi Leta Hoon,
Aur Aawaaz bhi nahi hoti !!!
Just copied from web... :P .. Nice lines
Puneet Agrawal
Thank You :)
DeleteLines are like pearls....dey flew my heart...
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